Firstly, I have to apologise for not posting this sooner. For some reason I forgot to write my usual blog post, following the writing group meeting. I must be getting old!
Anyway, the Lowestoft Library Writers' Group met on Tuesday 12th March.
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Our homework for the past month was to write a piece inspired by a picture from a calendar.
I chose this picture -
And decided to use it to write a poem. After our Februrary meeting, I was inspired to write a poem. A few members of the group read out some poems that they'd written previously, and that gave me some ides to turn on the poetic side if my brain which has been dozing on and off for quite a while.
Now, as most of you know, I don't like to make life easy for myself, so rather than just writing a regular, run of the mill poem, I decided to write a sestina. This is a poem with a strict structure. It's all explained on the wiki page.
The Scene
A stretch of blue
becomes the sky
And houses the clouds
filled with snow
That washes white the
tips of mountains
As they break free and
crumble into rocks
And nestle on the faded
grass
Which feeds the hungry
sheep
And as the days pass
by, the sheep
Graze beneath the
darkening sky
And make their bed
between blades of grass
Away from the high
point peaks of snow
And while back and
forth the world rocks
The scene stays steady
as a mountain
The moon rises behind
the mountain
As the world is
counting sheep
And mothers are gently
rocking
Their babies under a
starlit sky
Protected from the
wind, rain, and snow
That blankets the
frightened grass
The land brings forth
drought but grass
Breathes life through
cracks. The mountains
Keep watch, blinking as
snow
Falls over their eyes,
and blankets the sheep
Who till and tend and
farm, as the sky
Changes colour to match
the rocks
Worldly torment lands
us between a rock
And a hard place but
step through grass
And sand and water to
feel as free as the sky
Dwelling birds that
survey the world from mountain
Tops as man follows
leaders like sheep
To the slaughter,
leaving red stains on white snow
But as the sun shines
bright through the grey, the snow
Melts and washes away
they decay from the rocks
And cleanses the tired
feet of the oblivious sheep
That pace back and
forth, wearing tracks in the grass
Never knowing they
could stand as still as mountains
To peacefully gaze at
the wonders beneath the sky
A snow drop tear slides
down a blade of grass
And glistens on the
rock face that longs to be a mountain
That shields the sheep
from the threats of the sky
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Di set writing tasks for the group, but I didn't do them. I was putting the finishing touches to our Anthology, along with the members of the group, checking our pieces for typos, missing apostrophes, and any other anomalies. The book, entitled Colours of the Coast, should hopefully be published within the next month through Createspace. I will obviously let you all know when it's available to buy.
Here is the cover, just to whet your appetite!
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Our next meeting will be Tuesday 9th April, and our homework for that session is to write about a place we know, using all five (or six) of our senses.
You bring the scenery to life in this poem. Such a wondrous world we live in. Impressed with your wg. My group struggles when there is nothing to critique. This keeps the writing juices flowing!
ReplyDeleteThank you :) We tend to do a lot of different activities in order to keep the juiced flowing, as we know how difficult it is to keep on top of things!
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